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 Jul 15 2008, 01:50 AM
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 Knows she doesn't know  Group: Members Posts: 5,088 Joined: 19-July 04 Member No.: 583  |
I don't want to sleep
Yet don't want to know Oblivion would feel like home I have nothing to call my own The demons are here Keeping me awake Putting me to sleep While sleeping I don't need hugs Awake, I don't want hugs I'm tired of my life My life is so tired of me It yawns Can't catch its breath And I sleep Ed note: this was written a while back. Undated. -------------------- Proud member of the "I don't always wait until I finish reading the thread to respond" club. ~~~~~~~~~~ As for me, I would rather be able to love things I cannot have, than to have things I'm not able to love. .~Merrit Malloy IMPVHO |
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Jul 15 2008, 12:54 PM
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 Pretentious Blockhead Group: Members Posts: 4,406 Joined: 22-April 05 From: ^ Member No.: 1,446 |
QUOTE (TheDuncePolice @ Jul 15 2008, 02:50 AM)  [...] My life is so tired of me It yawns Can't catch its breath And I sleep [...] i love the voice when it refocuses on something/one other than self. i think learning to express 'self' without 'self' expressed is one of the most difficult things to master in poetry. removing 'self' into a different perspective helps. it's nice to see you posting. -------------------- |
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Jul 15 2008, 06:38 PM
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QUOTE (Ahavati @ Jul 15 2008, 01:54 PM) i think learning to express 'self' without 'self' expressed is one of the most difficult things to master in poetry. Oh, yes, a thousand times yes. -------------------- דעלך סני לחברך לא תעביד
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Jul 15 2008, 07:23 PM
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 Verisimilitudinous Group: Members Posts: 8,938 Joined: 25-June 03 From: Runway 37 Member No.: 106 |
QUOTE (accolade @ Jul 15 2008, 07:38 PM) Oh, yes, a thousand times yes. A thousand times?  mosheshmeal . -------------------- If I don't write to empty my mind, I go mad. ~Lord Byron |
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